Out of 4 stars, I would rate this book at a 2 ½. An interesting novel written by a thirteen year old that entwines realistic fiction of a young girl on her deathbed with her fantasy fiction dreams. The main story is that of Joa’s dreams which are self reflecting of her own life. Flavia has used all the typical elements of fantasy fiction including the lady in the lake, a prophecy, magical powers and places, enchanted swords and rings, and a fight with evil. Three girls, Jade, Opal and Amber, find out on their fourteenth birthday what a powerful role they each play in finding each other and helping to save the world. They are united by stones that each girl possesses that lead them on their incredible journey. The storyline is captivating, but the characters and setting are underdeveloped. Flavia tries almost too hard to have strong word choice through similes, metaphors, phrases and idioms, which takes away from the plaisir and jouissance of reading. In time, she will mature and grow as a writer and I look forward to future books.
